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    A Christmas Fantasy..
    She sighed deeply as she laid down on the sofa with her cup of tea. She surveyed her domain, mentally checking off the things she had accomplished today. The house was perfect; she could smell the faint scent of cleaners she had used today over the cinnamon and nutmeg she had in a simmer pot. The tree was twinkling with its purple and pink lights, and the decorations were perfect. Maybe a little girly, but since she had no one to please but herself she indulged in the pink and purple confection that was her tree this year. She leaned forward in her red lace nightgown to pick up a little bit of glitter that had fallen from the poinsettia on the coffee table. Leaning back again she laid her head down on her arms and closed her eyes just for a few moments . . .

    He swore for the hundredth time that night as he stomped his boots in the magical fireplace that appeared in the doorway to the next house on his route. He really didn’t want to do this job but it was one of those ones that he didn’t have much choice about. He cursed his long ago ancestors that took up the job of being Santa Claus; why couldn’t they have been something like a shoe maker or bookkeepers? Never mind that he was born a butch, there wasn’t much debate about him taking up the mantle of the job since there was no one else to do it. There wasn’t much of a chance of finding a Mrs. Claus sitting up in the north pole. He knew his social life would always be in the toilet until he found the right one but how was he suppose to find the right one when he didn’t even know what he wanted in the first place. This was his one chance a year to maybe find someone that interested him enough to come south for to see if he could entice her to come to the north pole to be Mother Christmas.

    He finally looked around and his breath stopped; she was stunning and sleeping like an angel. Her black curly hair was draped across her cheek, every time she took a breath a curl moved. He felt an overwhelming urge to move the curl off of her full lips, and tuck it behind her ear. He started to take in the rest of her with red lace barely covering what should be covered. He felt his stomach drop to his knees. He stared at her, drinking her in. He stared at her full hips, long arms and legs, sweet and creamy pale white skin. It hit him like a tonne of bricks that she reminded him of the classical look of Snow White. Down to the fragile tea cup balanced precariously between her hand and the arm of the sofa, as if she were waiting for a kiss from a prince to wake her.

    He realized that his heart was hammering in his ears and he had not moved for several minutes while he watched her sleep. He didn’t realize he was moving until he was inches from her, reaching out his gloved hand to ease the tea cup out of her hand. He moved deftly after years of practice with endless children trying to wait up to catch Santa. She didn’t stir as he completed his extraction of the dainty cup and placed it on the coffee table. He hesitated before moving away, her scent was so intoxicating, he felt his head begin to spin. He looked at his hand as it smoothed away the hair from her cheek; feeling as though it belonged to someone else because he didn’t remember making the choice to move his hand.

    She felt the velvety softness touch her lips and she smelled the leather. She was confused, there was nothing in the living room that should smell like leather. Why was she smelling it so close and warm? Why was her hair moving off her lip? She could feel it slowly moving as if someone was taking the care not to disturb her sleep. Her brow furrowed, something was just not right, she had to wake up and find out what this smell was . . .

    He watched her eyes open and he felt his breath leave him as the most startling clear violet eyes looked into his. He could not help himself; he knew he should be using his magic to put her back to sleep and make her forget he was there. He knew that she was going to start screaming any moment, he knew what he should be doing. All he could do was fall into the deep violet of her eyes. He didn’t want to come out of that moment; that single moment that all that mattered in the world was the electricity sparking between them in their eyes.

    She opened her eyes to find merry pools of blue staring at her. She blinked for a moment as she felt herself slide into those pools of clear blue liquid ice that warmed her from the tip of her toes to the top of her head. She flicked her eyes over him, thinking that she really should be screaming bloody murder by now. She felt safe and knew that he meant her no harm. She wasn’t understanding what she was seeing, the red suit, the black boots made her think of Santa but this was a butch. A rather delicious butch at that, but a butch, none the less. She couldn’t contain herself anymore, she had to ask . . .

    He watched her tongue lick her lips slowly and he knew he was lost. It took a moment for him to realize she was speaking not screaming. This was a very good sign.

    “So, Santa is a butch?” Her voice was like liquid caramel, smooth and sweet, coating him in its luxury and pulling him down further into the turmoil that was within him. She reached out and cupped her hand to his cheek. The most amazing thing happened at that moment, she smiled. The world as he knew it stopped at that instant while diamonds came into her eyes, “I always believed.” She whispered.

    He didn’t make the conscious decision to kiss her, he didn’t realize he was going to do it until he was feeling her warm breath on his lips. The moment their lips touched he fell into their velvet smoothness. Where he had thought he was lost before, he knew to the bottom of his north pole toes that this woman was who he had been looking for. The woman that he had just a few moments ago didn’t think existed. He knew nothing of her, he didn’t even know her name, but he knew that she was his Mother Christmas. He whispered back as almost a confirmation to himself, “I am real.”

    She felt all logic leave her as Santa Claus kissed her, her head was spinning. She was kissing Santa. Santa was a butch. Santa was in her house and kissing her. At that moment when she felt Santa’s tongue enter her mouth to dance with her tongue, all thought was suspended. She could only think of the sensations going through her and into him. The energy that was being fed to her by Santa made her feel drunk with joy.

    Their lips parted and they pressed their foreheads together for a moment trying to calm themselves. He managed to come back to himself first, “What is your name?”

    She managed to form the thought needed to tell him, “Belle.”

    “Beautiful . . . you certainly are that.” He whispered back, “Belle, would you like to spend Christmas day together? Christmas eve is a little hectic for me, if you understand.”

    “Of course I understand Santa, and I would love to spend Christmas day with you. What girl wouldn’t want to spend Christmas with Santa? I have all of these wonderful things but no one to share them with.”

    Santa smiled, “Well tomorrow it will be the two of us.” Using his magic, from his pocket he produced the most beautiful ornament Belle had ever seen. It was a tiny fairy dressed in pink and purple and holding a tiny bell. Her wings radiated a rainbow of colors and glittered in the light from the room. Belle jumped back as the little fairy turned her head and fluttered her wings. She noticed the little fairy looked exactly like her, down to her smile. She looked at Santa with a mixture of joy and awe and back to the fairy that was stretching her wings.

    Santa just smiled, “When she rings her little bell, I will be on my way to spend Christmas with you.” Just then the fairy took flight and landed in Belle’s tree. She settled herself on a string of garland, and began to swing gently.

    Santa took a quick kiss of her soft inviting lips again, then stood, moving back into the magical fire place. “Good night my Belle, I will be with you soon.”, With that he took his last step backward and as the fireplace began to disappear Belle heard his parting words.

    “A Merry Christmas to all! And to all a good night!”

    Belle smiled, and thought “Yes, it’s going to be a very Merry Christmas.”

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    Blue Moon Wolf -

    Wow-oh-wow! I loved your story. It has all the magic and wonderfulness that Christmas stories do. I makes me believe too!

    Artdecogoddess

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    Thats a great Christmas story BMW.....and of course santa is a butch....smiles
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    Quote Originally Posted by Artdecogoddess View Post
    Blue Moon Wolf -

    Wow-oh-wow! I loved your story. It has all the magic and wonderfulness that Christmas stories do. I makes me believe too!

    Artdecogoddess
    It was kind of inspired by the idea that Santa could be butch and the song "I saw Mommy kissing Santa Claus" I smashed them together and Violia. and thank you

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    Thats a great Christmas story BMW.....and of course santa is a butch....smiles
    How silly of me not to know that Thank you very much


    7 more days people until the deadline!!!and I don't do extentions!
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post

    A Christmas Fantasy..
    She sighed deeply as she laid down on the sofa with her cup of tea. She surveyed her domain, mentally checking off the things she had accomplished today. The house was perfect; she could smell the faint scent of cleaners she had used today over the cinnamon and nutmeg she had in a simmer pot. The tree was twinkling with its purple and pink lights, and the decorations were perfect. Maybe a little girly, but since she had no one to please but herself she indulged in the pink and purple confection that was her tree this year. She leaned forward in her red lace nightgown to pick up a little bit of glitter that had fallen from the poinsettia on the coffee table. Leaning back again she laid her head down on her arms and closed her eyes just for a few moments . . .

    He swore for the hundredth time that night as he stomped his boots in the magical fireplace that appeared in the doorway to the next house on his route. He really didn’t want to do this job but it was one of those ones that he didn’t have much choice about. He cursed his long ago ancestors that took up the job of being Santa Claus; why couldn’t they have been something like a shoe maker or bookkeepers? Never mind that he was born a butch, there wasn’t much debate about him taking up the mantle of the job since there was no one else to do it. There wasn’t much of a chance of finding a Mrs. Claus sitting up in the north pole. He knew his social life would always be in the toilet until he found the right one but how was he suppose to find the right one when he didn’t even know what he wanted in the first place. This was his one chance a year to maybe find someone that interested him enough to come south for to see if he could entice her to come to the north pole to be Mother Christmas.

    He finally looked around and his breath stopped; she was stunning and sleeping like an angel. Her black curly hair was draped across her cheek, every time she took a breath a curl moved. He felt an overwhelming urge to move the curl off of her full lips, and tuck it behind her ear. He started to take in the rest of her with red lace barely covering what should be covered. He felt his stomach drop to his knees. He stared at her, drinking her in. He stared at her full hips, long arms and legs, sweet and creamy pale white skin. It hit him like a tonne of bricks that she reminded him of the classical look of Snow White. Down to the fragile tea cup balanced precariously between her hand and the arm of the sofa, as if she were waiting for a kiss from a prince to wake her.

    He realized that his heart was hammering in his ears and he had not moved for several minutes while he watched her sleep. He didn’t realize he was moving until he was inches from her, reaching out his gloved hand to ease the tea cup out of her hand. He moved deftly after years of practice with endless children trying to wait up to catch Santa. She didn’t stir as he completed his extraction of the dainty cup and placed it on the coffee table. He hesitated before moving away, her scent was so intoxicating, he felt his head begin to spin. He looked at his hand as it smoothed away the hair from her cheek; feeling as though it belonged to someone else because he didn’t remember making the choice to move his hand.

    She felt the velvety softness touch her lips and she smelled the leather. She was confused, there was nothing in the living room that should smell like leather. Why was she smelling it so close and warm? Why was her hair moving off her lip? She could feel it slowly moving as if someone was taking the care not to disturb her sleep. Her brow furrowed, something was just not right, she had to wake up and find out what this smell was . . .

    He watched her eyes open and he felt his breath leave him as the most startling clear violet eyes looked into his. He could not help himself; he knew he should be using his magic to put her back to sleep and make her forget he was there. He knew that she was going to start screaming any moment, he knew what he should be doing. All he could do was fall into the deep violet of her eyes. He didn’t want to come out of that moment; that single moment that all that mattered in the world was the electricity sparking between them in their eyes.

    She opened her eyes to find merry pools of blue staring at her. She blinked for a moment as she felt herself slide into those pools of clear blue liquid ice that warmed her from the tip of her toes to the top of her head. She flicked her eyes over him, thinking that she really should be screaming bloody murder by now. She felt safe and knew that he meant her no harm. She wasn’t understanding what she was seeing, the red suit, the black boots made her think of Santa but this was a butch. A rather delicious butch at that, but a butch, none the less. She couldn’t contain herself anymore, she had to ask . . .

    He watched her tongue lick her lips slowly and he knew he was lost. It took a moment for him to realize she was speaking not screaming. This was a very good sign.

    “So, Santa is a butch?” Her voice was like liquid caramel, smooth and sweet, coating him in its luxury and pulling him down further into the turmoil that was within him. She reached out and cupped her hand to his cheek. The most amazing thing happened at that moment, she smiled. The world as he knew it stopped at that instant while diamonds came into her eyes, “I always believed.” She whispered.

    He didn’t make the conscious decision to kiss her, he didn’t realize he was going to do it until he was feeling her warm breath on his lips. The moment their lips touched he fell into their velvet smoothness. Where he had thought he was lost before, he knew to the bottom of his north pole toes that this woman was who he had been looking for. The woman that he had just a few moments ago didn’t think existed. He knew nothing of her, he didn’t even know her name, but he knew that she was his Mother Christmas. He whispered back as almost a confirmation to himself, “I am real.”

    She felt all logic leave her as Santa Claus kissed her, her head was spinning. She was kissing Santa. Santa was a butch. Santa was in her house and kissing her. At that moment when she felt Santa’s tongue enter her mouth to dance with her tongue, all thought was suspended. She could only think of the sensations going through her and into him. The energy that was being fed to her by Santa made her feel drunk with joy.

    Their lips parted and they pressed their foreheads together for a moment trying to calm themselves. He managed to come back to himself first, “What is your name?”

    She managed to form the thought needed to tell him, “Belle.”

    “Beautiful . . . you certainly are that.” He whispered back, “Belle, would you like to spend Christmas day together? Christmas eve is a little hectic for me, if you understand.”

    “Of course I understand Santa, and I would love to spend Christmas day with you. What girl wouldn’t want to spend Christmas with Santa? I have all of these wonderful things but no one to share them with.”

    Santa smiled, “Well tomorrow it will be the two of us.” Using his magic, from his pocket he produced the most beautiful ornament Belle had ever seen. It was a tiny fairy dressed in pink and purple and holding a tiny bell. Her wings radiated a rainbow of colors and glittered in the light from the room. Belle jumped back as the little fairy turned her head and fluttered her wings. She noticed the little fairy looked exactly like her, down to her smile. She looked at Santa with a mixture of joy and awe and back to the fairy that was stretching her wings.

    Santa just smiled, “When she rings her little bell, I will be on my way to spend Christmas with you.” Just then the fairy took flight and landed in Belle’s tree. She settled herself on a string of garland, and began to swing gently.

    Santa took a quick kiss of her soft inviting lips again, then stood, moving back into the magical fire place. “Good night my Belle, I will be with you soon.”, With that he took his last step backward and as the fireplace began to disappear Belle heard his parting words.

    “A Merry Christmas to all! And to all a good night!”

    Belle smiled, and thought “Yes, it’s going to be a very Merry Christmas.”

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    Fantastic story BlueMoonWolf.
    Love me for me not someone you want me to be.

    I just want to touch you and make you sigh, not hit you and make you cry. " By Washteween"







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    Hey Chey at the rate this is going you are going to get this one by default unless someone else posts a story by Saturday!

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    Working on my story - just slowly despite caffeine etc.

    Artdecogoddess - who promises she will post by Saturday!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Artdecogoddess View Post
    Working on my story - just slowly despite caffeine etc.

    Artdecogoddess - who promises she will post by Saturday!
    Looking forward to it Artdeco!
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    Working on mine as well.

    Coming along pretty good, lol...and it's another
    cute rhyming story if that's ok.









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    Though it's not my work, I'm posting this here because it fits the theme, it's short as hell, and well, because Neil Gaiman is a genius and on my list of 5 People I'd Like To Have Dinner With And Pick Their Brains For A Couple Of Hours (and no, not in a kind of way...) So.... a Christmas story, from Neil Gaiman:

    Nicholas Was....

    older than sin, and his beard could grow no whiter. He wanted to die.

    The dwarvish natives of the Arctic caverns did not speak his language, but conversed in their own twittering tongue, conducted incomprehensible rituals, when they were not actually working in the factories.

    Once every year they forced him, sobbing and protesting, into Endless Night. During the journey he would stand near every child in the world, leave one of the dwarves' invisible gifts by its bedside. The children slept, frozen into time.

    He envied Prometheus and Loki, Sisyphus and Judas. His punishment was harsher.

    Ho.
    Ho.
    Ho.
    Last edited by JD; 12-13-2006 at 04:47 PM. Reason: To make damn sure it's clear this story is by Neil Gaiman!

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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post

    Working on mine as well.

    Coming along pretty good, lol...and it's another
    cute rhyming story if that's ok.



    Of course it is.. the only thing i am firm on is the deadline
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    Quote Originally Posted by JD View Post
    Though it's not my work, I'm posting this here because it fits the theme, it's short as hell, and well, because Neil Gaiman is a genius and on my list of 5 People I'd Like To Have Dinner With And Pick Their Brains For A Couple Of Hours (and no, not in a kind of way...) So.... a Christmas story, from Neil Gaiman:

    Nicholas Was....

    older than sin, and his beard could grow no whiter. He wanted to die.

    The dwarvish natives of the Arctic caverns did not speak his language, but conversed in their own twittering tongue, conducted incomprehensible rituals, when they were not actually working in the factories.

    Once every year they forced him, sobbing and protesting, into Endless Night. During the journey he would stand near every child in the world, leave one of the dwarves' invisible gifts by its bedside. The children slept, frozen into time.

    He envied Prometheus and Loki, Sisyphus and Judas. His punishment was harsher.

    Ho.
    Ho.
    Ho.


    LOLOL that is just hilarious
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post
    A Christmas Fantasy..


    An extremely wonderful story........... you did a slendid job
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    Quote Originally Posted by DallasLesbian View Post
    An extremely wonderful story........... you did a slendid job
    Thank you
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    Wish Upon an Ornament



    The ornament falls down to the ground,

    making a magical noise as it splits in two.
    A glittery dust rises, and the room fills with a crimson hue.
    Out of the dust, a silhouette appears...it's my ghost of Christmas yesteryear!
    I recognize the smile; I remember the aroma of spiked cider as she comes near.
    It's been 20 years, what are you doing here?”
    She looked at me and said
    "Oh, I need YOUR help this time my dear
    We sat in front of the fire, and the chimney decorated with care.
    She sipped on her cider, spiked with her favorite Courvoisier.

    She smiled sweetly at me, pointing toward the top of the tree
    "You see that ornament up there...?"
    I nodded yes, as she giggled and flipped her hair.
    "There's a woman inside, she's got quite the flair
    At this point, I thought I'd fall off my chair.
    My glittery ghost had a crush on a woman...how extraordinaire!
    We both smiled and laughed; I put another log on the fire.
    Who knew my ghost had such naughty desires?

    She nibbled a cookie, and got nervous in anticipation.
    I asked her how and where she's been.
    "I've been on vacation".
    “Where did you go?”
    I wondered out loud.
    "I traveled upon a party line cloud.
    A place where there are absolutely NO good girls allowed
    She smiled at me sideways, and continued the tale.
    "That is where I met this handsome young female.
    She took me by surprise, and offered me her coat tails.
    We rode all night, into the Tuscan Sun.
    Then the moment came, and sadly our time together was done"
    I almost felt sorry for her, were it not for that smile.
    In fact, this old Butch kinda likes her style.

    I went to the closet to retrieve the ladder.
    "How do you know this one is her?
    And why is she hanging on my Douglas fir?"
    She beamed and said,
    Oh never mind all that, let’s just get her down from there kind Sir
    This is turning out to be a strange night for sure.

    I reached up to get this ornamental splendor,
    time then froze as the ornament hit the floor.
    I thought I’d seen it all before.
    There was glitter and lights, and colors galore!
    There were fairies and angels and butterflies and more!
    And then there came a knock at the door.
    I couldn’t pull my eyes away.
    If I opened the door, would they all fly away?
    No, please…I want them to stay!
    Nothing in my life has ever made me feel this way!
    With my eyes still locked, I slowly opened the door.
    A blast of air broke my focus, and I was thrown to the floor.
    I swiftly got up, but was stopped in my path.
    There in the doorway, was my Ghost of Christmas past!
    She wore ribbons of red and violets in her hair so blue.
    There were colors in her eyes, a brilliance of hues.
    Inside those eyes, there were secrets with no clues.
    So mysterious a presence, yet familiar like a deja-vue!
    She wore a gift tag that read
    This is your dream come true.”

    Remembering now, 20 years ago…she had come to me on that Christmas night.
    She had promised me one wish, but she gave me such a fright.
    I was too scared to tell her what I wished, and what I might.
    She must have heard me pray that night!
    Her lashes fluttered and she smiled at me.
    Aren’t you going to ask me in silly?”
    Stunned and amused, I said
    Yes, of course! Do come in…”
    Now if I could just stop this childish grin.
    The rest of this story is where our lives did begin.
    So remember that dreams do come true, and Santa is always listenin.

    Make a wish upon your favorite ornament this year,
    and hang in on your tree with care.
    When the time is right and the reindeer appears…maybe your ornament
    will fall and bring you endless cheer.




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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post
    Wish Upon an Ornament




    Kudo's to you!!! Sir Day, your story was worth the wait As usual, good job my friend.
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    OMG Daywalker! Fantastic! Adorable! and lovely! Thank you for posting it!
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    Quote Originally Posted by DallasLesbian View Post
    Kudo's to you!!! Sir Day, your story was worth the wait As usual, good job my friend.
    Thank you DL...!

    As per usual, I made the deadline just in a Saint Nick o'time...lol!









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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post
    Thank you DL...!


    As per usual, I made the deadline just in a Saint Nick o'time...lol!


    Yes, I did notice this.............we really need to talk about this habit of yours..............I hate it
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post
    OMG Daywalker! Fantastic! Adorable! and lovely! Thank you for posting it!
    Aawww...!

    Thank you BMW,
    I loved all the other stories I finally had time to read!

    So freaking creative, ya know?

    Just blows my mind,
    and makes this thread one of my all time favorites!

    Fabulous round, and I loved the Topic!









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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post
    Wish Upon an Ornament




    The ornament falls down to the ground,

    making a magical noise as it splits in two.




    A glittery dust rises, and the room fills with a crimson hue.





    Out of the dust, a silhouette appears...it's my ghost of Christmas yesteryear!





    I recognize the smile; I remember the aroma of spiked cider as she comes near.





    It's been 20 years, what are you doing here?”





    She looked at me and said





    "Oh, I need YOUR help this time my dear





    We sat in front of the fire, and the chimney decorated with care.





    She sipped on her cider, spiked with her favorite Courvoisier.







    She smiled sweetly at me, pointing toward the top of the tree





    "You see that ornament up there...?"





    I nodded yes, as she giggled and flipped her hair.





    "There's a woman inside, she's got quite the flair





    At this point, I thought I'd fall off my chair.





    My glittery ghost had a crush on a woman...how extraordinaire!





    We both smiled and laughed; I put another log on the fire.





    Who knew my ghost had such naughty desires?







    She nibbled a cookie, and got nervous in anticipation.





    I asked her how and where she's been.





    "I've been on vacation".





    “Where did you go?”





    I wondered out loud.





    "I traveled upon a party line cloud.





    A place where there are absolutely NO good girls allowed





    She smiled at me sideways, and continued the tale.





    "That is where I met this handsome young female.





    She took me by surprise, and offered me her coat tails.





    We rode all night, into the Tuscan Sun.





    Then the moment came, and sadly our time together was done"





    I almost felt sorry for her, were it not for that smile.





    In fact, this old Butch kinda likes her style.







    I went to the closet to retrieve the ladder.





    "How do you know this one is her?





    And why is she hanging on my Douglas fir?"





    She beamed and said,





    Oh never mind all that, let’s just get her down from there kind Sir





    This is turning out to be a strange night for sure.







    I reached up to get this ornamental splendor,





    time then froze as the ornament hit the floor.





    I thought I’d seen it all before.





    There was glitter and lights, and colors galore!





    There were fairies and angels and butterflies and more!





    And then there came a knock at the door.





    I couldn’t pull my eyes away.





    If I opened the door, would they all fly away?





    No, please…I want them to stay!





    Nothing in my life has ever made me feel this way!





    With my eyes still locked, I slowly opened the door.





    A blast of air broke my focus, and I was thrown to the floor.





    I swiftly got up, but was stopped in my path.





    There in the doorway, was my Ghost of Christmas past!





    She wore ribbons of red and violets in her hair so blue.





    There were colors in her eyes, a brilliance of hues.





    Inside those eyes, there were secrets with no clues.





    So mysterious a presence, yet familiar like a deja-vue!





    She wore a gift tag that read





    This is your dream come true.”







    Remembering now, 20 years ago…she had come to me on that Christmas night.





    She had promised me one wish, but she gave me such a fright.





    I was too scared to tell her what I wished, and what I might.





    She must have heard me pray that night!





    Her lashes fluttered and she smiled at me.





    Aren’t you going to ask me in silly?”





    Stunned and amused, I said





    Yes, of course! Do come in…”





    Now if I could just stop this childish grin.





    The rest of this story is where our lives did begin.





    So remember that dreams do come true, and Santa is always listenin.







    Make a wish upon your favorite ornament this year,





    and hang in on your tree with care.





    When the time is right and the reindeer appears…maybe your ornament





    will fall and bring you endless cheer.






    you make me smile DAYWALKER...and on occasion a tears come to my eyes...ones of love...a wonderfully told story my baybee...."BRAVO" !!
    you are truly gifted in so many ways...

    I am Hys ,Hy is mine.

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    Daywalker have to agree with Lady Flamezzz you are definitely talented. Excellant story, poem - maybe one day you could publish some of your writings.
    Love me for me not someone you want me to be.

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    oops my apologies yall

    i messed up on spacing,lol

    so shoot me !
    I am Hys ,Hy is mine.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LADY FLAMEZZZ View Post
    you make me smile DAYWALKER...and on occasion a tears come to my eyes...ones of love...a wonderfully told story my baybee...."BRAVO" !!
    you are truly gifted in so many ways...

    I am gifted with the likes of your company M'Lady.

    You inspire me more than you may know.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Electrocell View Post
    Daywalker have to agree with Lady Flamezzz you are definitely talented. Excellant story, poem - maybe one day you could publish some of your writings.
    Thank you Electrocell, words of encouragement are what
    keeps these stories alive.

    I would love to put a collection together,
    perhaps one day I will have the time to do so.
    It truly is on my "list" though...lol, of things I would really love to do.








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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post
    Cut off is 9:42 pm MST. if you are going to do it... Do it soon.
    Lol...what is this referring to?

    Perhaps Nanee's sauntering in with that shiny metal piece of bullet launcher?

    That's too funny! A cut off time for shooting...lmaooo!

    Ok, so BMW are all the stories in and are we ready for the
    question guessing part now?


    Looking forward to the next Topic selection!








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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post
    Lol...what is this referring to?

    Perhaps Nanee's sauntering in with that shiny metal piece of bullet launcher?

    That's too funny! A cut off time for shooting...lmaooo!

    Ok, so BMW are all the stories in and are we ready for the
    question guessing part now?


    Looking forward to the next Topic selection!


    LOL sorry having christmas early here today didn't have time to explain myself. i am going to change it because well i wasn't thinking... Deadline is 11:42 pm MST tonight to get the stories in .. I will post the question by midnight MST.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post
    LOL sorry having christmas early here today didn't have time to explain myself. i am going to change it because well i wasn't thinking... Deadline is 11:42 pm MST tonight to get the stories in .. I will post the question by midnight MST.
    I thought the deadline was yesterday.

    This is putting a little killjoy on my usual wait until the absolute last
    minute to let mine fly to the boards.

    Crap.

    Crap...lol, and I had in here by 11:55pm my time too...!

    I feel as though I should celebrate for getting mine in a whole day
    early,
    but does it count it if wasn't intentional...lol?

    I dunno, but I will weigh that in after the celebrations...lol,
    might kill the mood.








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    Quote Originally Posted by DAYWALKER View Post
    I thought the deadline was yesterday.

    This is putting a little killjoy on my usual wait until the absolute last
    minute to let mine fly to the boards.

    Crap.

    Crap...lol, and I had in here by 11:55pm my time too...!

    I feel as though I should celebrate for getting mine in a whole day
    early,
    but does it count it if wasn't intentional...lol?

    I dunno, but I will weigh that in after the celebrations...lol,
    might kill the mood.




    LOL Daywalker, nope my Dad's birthday was Dec 16 and that was part of the premise.. to entertain my Dad on his birthday, whichever cloud he might be on. Which is also why the specific time that the deadline ends, the times are tied in to my Dad.

    And just to not let you twitch for another 2 odd hours... The question will be tied into my Dad as well.
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    Hey Folks - just got on-line and saw that I missed the cut-off. Ooopss. At leat I had a great inspiration for my story - and goodness knows that its always good to have nice story prompts. Stiill not quite finished - but I will (imagine the little voice saying , I think I can, I think I can).

    Chey, Daywalker and BMW - your stories were wonderful and made me feel just a little bit more ready for the holidays.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Artdecogoddess View Post
    Hey Folks - just got on-line and saw that I missed the cut-off. Ooopss. At leat I had a great inspiration for my story - and goodness knows that its always good to have nice story prompts. Stiill not quite finished - but I will (imagine the little voice saying , I think I can, I think I can).

    Chey, Daywalker and BMW - your stories were wonderful and made me feel just a little bit more ready for the holidays.

    xo
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    Artdeco, the cut off is in 45 minutes! you are still good, post away
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    okay it's now midnight.... and time to post the question...


    So the question is.... How old was my Dad when he passed? the guess range is 48-56.


    BTW this may seem a bit morbid considering the season... but to me it's not. My Dad was the original christmas freak, which he passed onto me. He LOVED Christmas stories and carols, sparkling lights and the joy of the season. So thank you everyone that helped send him a bit of christmas joy on his own special cloud


    Guessing we have:

    Chey:
    Daywalker:
    JD: (yes i know it wasn't your work but you posted)
    and Artdeco (yes i know you didn't post but there was some confusion about the cut off time, i am sure if you would have known you had another 45 minutes you could have finished it off, and well it's Christmas)
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post
    Artdeco, the cut off is in 45 minutes! you are still good, post away

    Okay so I posted my regrets and got off line! LOL - oh well. Next time.

    Thanks BMW for letting me guess - you are sweet!

    I am going to guess 50?


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    Guessing we have:

    Chey:50
    Daywalker:
    JD:

    and Artdeco:52
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    Wow, I get to guess?? Okay then... 55!

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post

    Guessing we have:

    Chey:50
    Daywalker:
    JD:

    and Artdeco:52

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post

    Guessing we have:

    Chey:50
    Daywalker:
    JD: 55
    and Artdeco:52
    Yep JD, i know it wasn't yours but you still did post, and well it's christmas
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlueMoonWolf View Post

    Guessing we have:

    Chey:50
    Daywalker: 49
    JD: 55

    and Artdeco:52
    I'll take 49 please.








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